I finished Fortress, the sequel to Squared with the Audrey/Duke/Jennifer/Nathan foursome action. It's ~30,000 words long. That's in draft, longhand, and usually they gain a few thou when typed.

Again with the despairing cry of, "It was never meant to be that long!"

Why I felt compelled to do this to myself I do not know, considering it's difficult enough trying to manage the relationship dynamics of writing a threesome and there are people far better than me at writing the polyamory. I'm like, how do you even manage those dynamics, with a foursome? I end up mostly treating them as two couples who live in each other's pockets and sometimes swap and change. And my mind goes straight back to Marion Zimmer Bradley's The Forbidden Tower because that's the only place I've read anything remotely like a foursome relationship dynamic before. (I was about 14. It was an eye-opener.)

Wish someone else would write this 'ship. Troublesfest produced a couple of other things that skirted it, but nothing that jumped in and had them all in bed together. (Do I always jump for the deep end and make life hard for myself?)

---

Actually, guys, a request: rec me foursome fics? I'm intrigued. I want to know how other writers have handled it.
tassosss: Shen Wei Zhao Yunlan Era (Default)

From: [personal profile] tassosss


Congrats on getting the draft done! I love the foursome, and I have a story idea featuring them, but I haven't written it yet, and I may not anytime soon as I have been subsumed by another fandom at the moment. Squared is my favorite of the foursome fics I've read, because I think you get a lot of the relationship dynamics between them right, giving them space to breathe and figure each other out. I'm super excited to read the sequel!
Edited Date: 2014-11-22 08:00 pm (UTC)
tassosss: Shen Wei Zhao Yunlan Era (Default)

From: [personal profile] tassosss


I love reading poly but I feel so weird trying to figure out how to write it. I think for me it's also the fact that I don't generally write a lot of romance. I mean, I can and have, but it's something I am definitely still learning how to do that I've only really done with any consistency in the last couple years.

When I wrote the threesome fic for Troublesfest, I was basically trying to treat it as a lot of overlapping couples relationships. I was terrified I would leave someone out, which was why the switching POVs too, which I know isn't everyone's cup of tea.

I adore Jennifer. I really love what she added to season 4, and as you say, she adds a softer balance that the other three need.
tassosss: Shen Wei Zhao Yunlan Era (Default)

From: [personal profile] tassosss


Thanks. I find it really hard to write crack - I think my brain is too logical or something, because I always end up with something that plays the wacky scenario straight.

When I signed up, I was actually kind of hoping for an OT4 request, because of the fic idea I mentioned above. I wanted to go ahead and write it. And then I saw the prompts and even though I didn't know where to start with Jordan, the prompt was too perfect not to do. I knew it would be long before I started. There I was, hoping for something I could knock out in 1000 words and then I get a prompt for a meaty story.

The relationship stuff can be hard, but that's because it's also the most interesting.
.

Profile

roseveare: (Default)
roseveare

Most Popular Tags

Page Summary

Powered by Dreamwidth Studios

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags